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Writer's pictureJonathan Finch

AMATEUR PERFORMANCE



(“At the climax of our performance, a lot of shouting yobs broke into the church.”)


Peace, disquiet, discrepancy,

The lot of varying concerns

Are melodiously moved

Within this ordered orchestra

Watching the concerns

Of a baton waved by an amateur.

Outdoors, in the pale evening,

Louts gather and grey

The paving stones with

Enormous efforts of flob. These,

Rubbed down by heels outside

A grotesque, well-frequented eating-house,

Contrast with the ordered

Ineptitude of the amateurs

Making a mistaken

Melody out of the impulse

To spit; but then chafed

Bully-boys descend

To overwhelm, at disaster’s bend,

Poor effort, like distant

Undefined musicians making

No melody but noise

Of fists and broken bottles, wails,

The incredible glory

Of gory, techno-autocratic

Scientific, murky malaise,

Making this direction plausible

Upon the church stones’

All-encompassing sin.



Better to be amateurs

To the catastrophic composers

Than experts whose despair

Makes bloody execution

Out of the obstreperous

And polluted air!

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